Thursday, January 24, 2013

Argumentative Essay

Hello everyone~
Today I want to write an argumentative Essay~

My essay topic is...
"CCTV in private places should not be allowed"

Thursday, January 17, 2013

My diamante Poem

Hello ladies and gentlemen??
I'm glad to see you again >.<
I guess everyone in class 13 knows that I love "Detective Conan"
Today, I will write my Diamante Poem with my lovely Conana and villian Jin.

There are a few rules you must follow to write a Diamante Poem...

1. Diamantes are SEVEN lines long.

2. The first and last lines have ONE word.
    The second and sixth lines ahve TWO words.
    The third and fifth lines have THREE words.
    The fourth lines have FOUR words.

3. Lines 1,4, and 7 have nouns.
    Lines 2 and 6 have adjectives
    Lines 3 and 5 have verb

   Like this...

Noun
Adjective   Adjective
Ing-verb          Ing-verb         Ing-verb
Noun                 Noun                  Noun             Noun
Ing-verb         Ing-verb          Ing-verb
A djective    Adjective
Noun



My response Essay to the movie "Brave"

Hello~!@.@

Last week wee watched the move "Brave" and today, I want to write my response Essay to the movie "Brave"





 Many people experienced their own complications.
There are complications between parents and their children, boss and workers, teachers and students...
There is a movie about complications between a mom and her daughter, Merida.
This movie is called "Brave"
Although this movie was just a animation, I felt sympathy and was touched by it.

 Once upon a time, there was a little, cute and naughty princess. She was a free girl but her mother, the queen wants her to be a princess, "princess" who is very nice and quiet girl. 


One day, the queen decided Merida needs to marry Merida did not want to, so she ran away to the forest and saw a wisps (a fairy kind) which which led her to the witch house. The witch gave her a spell which changed the queen into a bear.
However, later Merida change her fate and the queen's spell become extinct and she become a human again.



 The complications between Merida and her mother made me feel sympathetic to them.
In the movie, Merida did not wants her mother to make her own life. She wants to be a free girl with no pressure of the "princess". However, her mom wants her to be a nice and kind "princess". In this situation, their point of view about princess is different. They just want each other to understand their feeling. Some people might say 'why they can't understand each other?' and just criticize them, but it's a really common kind of complication.
Sometimes, I have complication with my mom too...
It's not exactly same with Merida and her mom's complication but almost similar. 
I wants my mom to understand me and listen to me but my mom also wants me to understand her and listen to her. 
The situation in this movie was really similar with my own life and this made me feel sympathy for them.

 I also think this movie was fun and exciting to watch (I don't know about other's opinion;; it's just my own opinion)
In this movie, there are three scenes that I like the most.
The first scene that I like is when Merida chases the wisps (kind of an elf or a fairy). The reason why I like the wisps is because wisps were pretty, creative and marvelous. I like their voice(?) -kind of a sound-, their shape -like an angel-, and their action -with a 'pop' sound they suddenly disappear-. They are really cute! So I like them >.<
The second scene that I like is when Merida met the witch. The reason why I like this scene is because I like the witch in the movie "Brave" I think that the witch in this story is really nice and kind. Also the process of making the magic cake was fun too;;.
The last scene that I like is when Merida's mom (the bear) changed back into a human. It was touching to me and it was really beautiful scene.

 This movie was mainly about the complications between Merida and her mother. She wants her mother to be changed so she got a spell from a witch and she become a bear but Merida changed her faith and she become a understandable mom again.
This movie was fun, interesting and touching. Also Merida and her mom's complications made me feel sympathetic towards them.







Thursday, January 10, 2013

This my own ode~!

Hello ladies and gentlemen~!^.^
Nice to see you again!!

Today, I want to write about my own ode.

  • An ode is a poem, especially one that is written in praise of a particular person, thing, or event.
This is my ode. My ode is about lovely chocolate ♡.



Dear lovely chocolate,

Chocolaty Wallpaper,

Black dark smooth skin is calling me...
Brown deep soft skin is whispering to me...
White creamy tender skin is attracting me...
How soft you are... How smooth you are...
You look so cool, so fascinating...



















MY lovely chocolate, you look prettier than Britney Spears
                     you are more unique than Lady gaga
                     you are more handsome than Justin Bieber
I can't stop looking at you...
I can't stop myself from buying you...
I can't stop my hands from opening your package.
I can't choose what to buy...
You are so shiny, so sweet, so soft and so smooth...

Dear sweet chocolate.
How fascinating you are!
Your shiny packs are calling me to buy them
Golden Ferrero Rocher is waving at me!
Creamy Hersheys is running at me!


You were made in a big fancy factory!
You were made by big fat women!
You were pressed by a big crazy machine!
And now you are here to be eatten by me!

Dear fantastic chocolate...
You are my sunshine!
You are my only love!
You are my best friends!
Let's be together for a lifetime~!!!




                                                       Your love, friend...
                                                 Song hyeon Jin

Wednesday, January 9, 2013

My 30 day challenges!

Hello ladies and gentlemen~
I'm glad to see you again~ How about you??

Today I want to tell you about my goals; 30 day challenges.
I guess most of you might feel you are 'stuck in a rut'.
When people feel they are stuck in a rut, they usually think they are in a boring lifestyle that "never" changes. This is not only for you but mostly everyone might thought of this at least one time. In order to spend good time and fruitful time, I think it's good idea to have simple goals.

I have some goals that I want to share and introduce to you!
There are three habits that I want to have for the next 30 days in GLPS camp! I want to read some news articles everyday, and I want to be a detailed person. Also I want to complete 3 pages of math problem solving everyday.

First, I want to read at least one news article. 
To do this, everyday I should go to second period self-study time. Next, I need to search for news article. Maybe I can search Bloomberg news or CNN news. And then, I can make notes about the important news that day.

In addition, I want to be a detailed person. 
To become a detailed person, I need think about details. Next, I can organize what I have to do. And then, I can act in a detailed way. For example, when I do homework or cleaning, I will pay attention attention to everything.

Finally, I want to complete 3 pages of math problem solving. To complete 3 pages of math problem solving, I need to make a schedule. Next, I can take out my math book and then I can solve the problem